coates

. What is Coates' main argument? america will never be a whole so matter how hard we try beacuse of the type of slvery.

2. What are some of the supporting points (reasons why) that Coates offers for his argument? mentioms jim crow wasike a dictator type deal with poll tax and lynching

3. What are two examples of Coates using HISTORY OR NARRATIVE (stories) in building his argument? stories during the jim crow times of lynching and also clyde ross story.

4. What are two examples of Coates using OTHER PEOPLE'S IDEAS in building his argument? of emmitteail and lou fuhanis

5. What are two examples of Coates using HIS OWN ORIGINAL IDEAS in building his argument? i did everything for that horse and they took him put him on the racetrack showshe put time in an care into something they took it away.

6. What are two examples of Coates using EMOTIONS in building his argument? clyde goes to war to get away from being harassed and botherd

6. What are two examples of Coates using INFORMATION in building his argument? he uses information from the lou fushannis part where he note lou owened over 600 propeties

7. How does Coates use POINT OF VIEW (first person, second person, and third person) to build his argument?  coates use the 3rd person point of view to alk about all the slavery that hashappend in the history of the united stare

8. If you would like (this is optional), what is your personal reaction to Coates' argument?

kellys questions

. What is kellys main argument? her claim is that social media should not be able to detrmine on what makes a girl pretty, and what exactly is a perfect body.

2. What are some of the supporting points (reasons why) that Kelly offers for her argument? interviews from teenage boys explain that girls that wear less clothing signifies  that they are pretty.

3. What are two examples of Kelly  using HISTORY OR NARRATIVE (stories) in building his argument? her own personal experiences with being called not pretty due to what she wears. and the fact that the two gentel man in the argument stated that girls that were less clothing gets the likes.

4. What are two examples of Kelly using OTHER PEOPLE'S IDEAS in building his argument? society and social media claims what makes a woman beautiful.

5. What are two examples of kelly using Her OWN ORIGINAL IDEAS in building his argument? talking about how solcail media is bendictive and controlling. and how men generalize girls on how cute they are by the less amount of clothes they have on.

6. What are two examples of kelly using EMOTIONS in building her argument?  she is putting her self and past experinces in the paper. and then her feeling torward how men thing a girls true beauty is detrmine by the amount of clothes they wear

6. What are two examples of kellysusing INFORMATION in building his argument? interview of teenagers expressing their feelings. and solci media post .

7. How does kelly use POINT OF VIEW (first person, second person, and third person) to build his argument?  by useing societys opinons and statments that they made.

8. If you would like (this is optional), what is your personal reaction to Coates' argument?

Revision

Top 3 content issues 1. Need to give more personal feelings not relating to my own experience we'll
2 make sure I cut out repeating my self
3rd make sure I'm clear with every mini question and how I answer if


1. What point of emphasis I need to improve on

2. How is my grammar and glow of the paper

3 will it be to emotion for someone that has family involved in both sides of this event .

all lives matter

my EE will be about how all lives matter not just black, white, or blue . Every life should be valued equally and the amount of violence that is taking place in today's world is inexcusable  . so there for my paper will discus the values of life in today society. the main question will be

how did the value of life become  segregated ?

1. what are the black lives matter and the campaign
2.what are the  blue lives matter and the campaign
3how is.equality being questioned in today world
will there be possible race wars in the 20th century?
4. what are the main reasons for behind black lives matters
5. whats being done to help this cause?
6. what are the main reasons for behind blue lives matters
7. whats being done to help this cause ?
8.how does the nation feel about this?
9. what are the arguments from both sides of these problems.
10. whats going to happend in 5 years from now .
11. why is the nation torn between these to issues.

EE descriptive discusion

in my EE i would like to discuss the controversial subject that is going on in today's world which is black lives matter vs. blue lives matters vs all live matters. i feel strongly about this topic and i feel as if  this topic should be dealt with and talked about from all points of views. so there for my question will be dosent all lives matter ? when did the color or profession n of some one can determine that their life has more value than someone else in a different profession .

5 diffrent levels of topic questions
explain all sides of the arugment
go over scenarios in each sub topic
give factual evidence and place personal emotions.

expanitory writing assighnment

1. explortatory writing is when you can write about a certain topic and you can look at diffrent problems with that one topic instead of looking at just one.exploratory papers do not have a argument about them like most paper set out to say .

2. in Wallace essay he is using exploratory writing to talk how the lobsters are being treated wrong and how they are cooked in the most cruel manor as possible. by making them suffer and through their death .Wallace dose not  just speak about how that way is wrong to cook lobsters but their meaning and how they are worshiped and the importance of the lobster.

walkers essay explores how it is to be a black woman in the south and during a hard time such as civil rights which she compares to the garden which they are living for the children to pass down ., what i observed from this article is that she doesn't make an argumentative point to argue about how she is treated but how the her mother passes down stuff to her children

in the long reads essay talks about how the swordfish is becoming extinct but at the same time people still value and worship the creature and how they appreciate what it stands for in their culture .

200 word sawfish

In the article twilight of the saw fish it discussed  how sever the population of the saw fished was decreasing in west Africa . This animal is considers a national treasure in the urban society  of Africa it worshiped all over . Now the whole point of the article   was somewhat pointless to me . I mean i understand it is important that this rare animal is slowly dyeing out in the west African are becoming extinct. now with that being said in long reads writing his writing style breaches out to his emotional side and how he can  relate the topic to real emotions and how he truly feels about what is going on the saw fish in Africa . now with that being said his research on how each type of sawsfish is rare and extinct in its own wahy, when member of the village discover remains of the sawsfish they begin to decorate and show triubute , and respect to this animal. but after all that information i find the article to be point less and not really benifital to my situation.