Top 3 content issues 1. Need to give more personal feelings not relating to my own experience we'll
2 make sure I cut out repeating my self
3rd make sure I'm clear with every mini question and how I answer if
1. What point of emphasis I need to improve on
2. How is my grammar and glow of the paper
3 will it be to emotion for someone that has family involved in both sides of this event .
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